原句：In America，modest is not a good attitude to deal with things.
修正：In America，modesty is not a good attitude to deal with things.
原句：Many people in the world are suffering from hungry and poor.
修正：Many people in the world are suffering from hunger and poverty 原句：As a result，the fast rate of increase became slowly.
修正：As a result，the fast rate of increase became slow.
原句：Sometimes the parents object the plan.
修正：Sometimes the parents object to the plan.
原句：Problems will approach to them quietly.
修正：Problems will approach them quietly.
原句：Maybe you think it just demand of tolerance and trust·
修正：Maybe you think it just demand tolerance and trust.
原句：It’s hard for a rural woman to accept.
修正：It’s hard for a rural woman to accept it.
原句：These girls and boys grown up in different society backgrounds. 修正：These girls and boys grow up in different society backgrounds. 原句：As we known，there are 7 billion people across the world now.
修正：As we know，there are 7 billion people across the world now.
原句：Find an overseas marriage partner is quite common these days. 修正：Finding an overseas marriage partner is quite common these days 四、介词误用
原句：If your parents are against，what can you do for that?
修正：Ifyour parents are against the marriage，what can you do for that? 原句：Now we should devote our time to take measures to deal with the waste-
修正：Now we should devote our time to taking measures to deal with the waste
原句：The reason of that is that such a marriage cannot be found in real life·
修正：The reason for that is that such a marriage cannot be found in real life·
原句：They begin to quarrel in trivial things.
修正：They begin to quarrel over trivial things.
原句：A horse is an useful animal.
修正：A horse is a useful animal.
原句：We can’t go in this weather it’S out of question-
修正：We can’t go in this weather it'S out ofthe question·
原句：Don’t put hands in pockets
修正：Don’t put your hands in your pockets
原句：Be cautious，or we encounter unexpected trouble
修正：Be cautious，or you encounter unexpected trouble.(注：英语祈使句的默认主语是you。)
原句：He is a young，gallant officer in his twenty.
修正：He is a young，gallant officer in his twenties.
原句：This box is as three times heavy as that.
修正：This box is as three times as heavy as that.