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话题:

If you've ever been disturbed by the noise of line dance, please share with us your experience.
Present your opinions towards these students' action and give some advice on this kind of dispute. 
 

范例1:

In fact, my grandma and even my dear mother have ever been the members of the line dance team in the community. They set out to go dancing on 7 o'clock and came back by 9 o'clock every evening. In their words, line dance is an interesting exercise which could improve their health condition. But as for me, they were just following the crowd, never considering its practical effect. I am not denying the positive functions of the line dance. The point I want to emphasize here is that not all people dance for good health and some just do it for fun. The noise problem caused by the line dance is not very serious in my city. In my opinion, the most fundamental reason for these disputes is that the public entertainment facilities the government invests to construct cannot meet the increasing physical fitness needs of middle-aged and elderly people. This can not be blamed entirely on some people's uncivilized behaviours or impolite words. Therefore, to decrease such disputes, the government should increase its investment in the construction of public entertainment facilities, and provide those dancers with an appropriate place. Meanwhile, the people themselves should also improve their own civilization quality and self-consciousness. Just as the saying goes, "Do not do to others what you would not have others do to you", and if those dancers can place themselves as one of those victims, they'll understand their annoyance. Only when both the people and the government take positive measures towards the line dance can the life be more beautiful and harmonious.
 
范例2:

That kind of dancing is not very popular inmy place. Usually some old people form as a small group and use a mini radio todance. The noise is not very loud and would not disturb the others. When I walkpass their place, I often like to see how they dance and how they enjoythemselves.

I think it is the matter of respect.Everyone has the rights to enjoy their life. We can do exercises, play games orsing songs only if the activities would not violate the rights of the others.Keeping the noise to an acceptable volume is a basic rule to hold on anyactivities. I could not find any excuses for them. So I hope all the dancerscan pay respect to the others. 


范例3:
I have no prejudice against the old people, and I think the line dance is a good way for them to entertain and socialize. But in China, good deeds sometimes can become a nuisance. This is the case. A bunch grandmas and grandpas gather in the little plaza or some open space in your neighborhood to dance, they really enjoy it. However, they really need to use the loudspeaker and have fun until night. The residents around have their own life and they do not appreciate the performance of the line dance. Thus the interest of conflict appears and when the residents cannot stand the noise and the bizarre activities, quarrels emerge. How should we solve this problem, actually, it’s quite easy. When we do something to entertain ourselves, we should consider the feeling of people around. In the case, the line dancers they should turn down their music, when night falls, they definitely should pack themselves and go back home, leaving the neighborhood quiet and peaceful. Then ,every one would have a nice dream, huh ? 

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