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背景介绍:

两个20多岁的青年,相距千里,相识于网络,跋山涉水走到一起,只为一件事——自杀。这死很安详,这安详人令人毛骨悚然。

自杀已经成为中国青少年头号死因。是什么令他们斗胆赴死,却不愿苟活?不幸的人生各有不幸,绝望的尽头却必须找到希望。 艰难时世,代表中国未来的80/90后,何时鲜血不再空掷?!


数字背后的现实:
中国每年28.7万死于自杀,还有200万人自杀未遂。

中国自杀率是国际平均数的2.3倍。

中国年轻人,自杀是第一大死因。

中国自杀者中40%没有精神疾病。

话题:

Who should be blamed for adolescent suicide?

What is the possible cause in triggering adolescent suicide?

范例1:

It is a cruel fact that more and more young people in China died due to the suicide. The tragedy that white hair people send off black hair people has appeared more frequently. However, the possible main cause in my mind is the gap between the rich and the poor in our society that makes the competitive environment worse and more unfair, resulting in the psychological health on the edge. Thinking in negative way will finally lead to negative solution, so teenagers should adjust their attitude and struggle to get what they want. If we cannot change the place we were born or the society we survive, we should change ourselves and stop hurting the feelings of those people who care and love you all the time.

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