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背景介绍:

每一个孩子,都像是一只风筝,他们的风筝线被紧紧的握在父母手中,每一位父母都希望把这根风筝线收的近一些,再近一些,一直陪伴在自己身边,然而每一只风筝都有他们向往的属于他们自己的一片天,面对此境,有些风筝选择了乖乖回家,有一些则忍痛转身,飞向那片充满未知的天空。

Each youngster may be compared to a kite with a kite string being held firmly in their parents. As parents, they always make the slender string tighter and tighter to stay together with their children. However, those kites also possess their own paradise of dream. They long for the flutter of wings as well. Facing this, some kites choose to come back to company their parents but some turn around to fly to the mysterious X.

话题:

Tell us which kind of kites you belong to and show us your idea~

范例1:

We can spend most of our life to company our family but there are only several years for us to achieve those precious dreams. Therefore, I may be the kites which turn around to start my adventure though I still care about my family holding the kite string on the other side.

On one hand,as to ourselves, youth always flies fast. We spent our childhood with our parents. There should be some time for oueselves to flutter the wings through the vast sky. At least we would have no pities when we get old and recall our whole life. At least we have ever struggled for our dreams. No matter the result is satisfying or not, there is no pity.On the other hand, as to our parents. They may afford our cost of living now but after all they can't support us all the time. Sooner of later we have to be independent to earn our living by our own. Thus we must try to adapt to this society instead of hiding behind our parents just like a lamb. We also have the duty to support them when they need taking care of. We could stay with them more only if we dig ourselevs in such a society.

Above all, flying kites don't mean impiety. They just determin to improve themselves to protect their family better.

范例2:

In the eyes of the parents, no matter how old their sons and daughters are, the parents will always see them as young children, needing care. It is understandable that even after graduating from high school or post-secondary, parents want to keep their children close to home. If these children are able to find desired work in the vicinity, of course it would be the best scenario. If, however, these children are able to pursue better opportunities by moving away from home, the parents should not hold them back. What the children need from the parents at that point, would be support, understanding and encouragement.

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