点评教师介绍：吴泽杨，上海新东方四六级作文主讲老师，悉尼大学对外英语教学硕士（TESOL）。
  
四级作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the Topic: Lectures or Discussions. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1、一些学生赞成讲座式教学；
2、另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学；
3、你的看法。

浮在T海的鱼：

Many university students are complaining about the lectures are boring and lack of originality.They can hardly concentrate themselves on the content,and were often carried away during the lecture.They said they didn't like the way of teaching.

However,another kind of teaching method called discussion,which is welcomed by more and more university students.They said that they tend to be more initiatively and actively during the discussion.Moreover,students are motivated by various topic of discussion,and they are likely to be inspired and open-minded.

Every coin has two sides,on the one hand,lecture won't be replaced by discussion because it's dominant statue in the teaching filed, and it as one of the traditional teaching method,which can't be elimnated by these newly-established teaching methods.On the other hand,lecturers should try harder to add some more interesting and originality part into thier lecture catering to students' taste.

点评：结构清楚，单复数和时态有混乱，简单词的拼写错误，大概8左右。

tudou919

There is no consuesus of opinions among students as to the view of the way to teach.Some students approve to the way of lecture.Reasons are listed as following:To begin with,teachers have plenty of time to teach,so students get more knowledge.Moreover,only this way,students' mind focus on the lesson.

Others students,on the contray,prefer to the way of disscussion.There are two reasons.For one thing,it is much time to students talking about what they learn.For another,teachers and students have a good communication.

I personally believe that we can combin with the two ways.We listen carefully to the teachers presentation,and then disscuss what we just learned.According this way,we will get more useful knowledge.

点评：结构运用很好，有部分变化。但有较多语法错误，如倒装和非谓语结构等，字数不够。大概8左右。

kiara_1103

Nowadays various kinds of the teaching ways has been taken in the most important patterns,Lecture and Discussion ,also cause a hit arguement among the of them hold the point to suppor the lectures,for which they have the chance to inquire konwledge more specific from the ise,lectures seems to specified a atmosphere of study to keep students from wandering in mind.

however,another amount of sudents opposit this viewpoint agree that the Dicussions is a better Dicussions,as a untraditional way taken from foreign,engage students to anticipate in the study fact ,establishment of the relax study obains the success ,not only in study ,but the communication.

for my viewpoint,the two ways also make huge meaning in the achievement of study with the appropriate arrangemnet. lt is our duty that to try both of the ways and find out the right for ourselves.

点评：结构清楚，有信号词。但大小写混乱和标点混乱，主谓一致和较多拼写错误，及其他语法错误。大概6～7左右。

tuzi_123

The lecture teaching style what is traditional teaching style is conformed by some students who think it is easy to accept for studying.

But, Another students prefer to discussions teaching style, The reason can be analized as follows.
Firstly, The discussions style could let all students become more activity in class. Secondly, The disscussion would enthusiasm students interesting on on course, At last, students can remenber the knowledge what study by discussion for a longer time than lecture teaching style.

In my opinion, I prefer discussions to lecture, to begin with, we will have the ability to question and solution a problem. On the other hand, more knowledge we will acquire through discussion on a question than lecture on the same problem

点评：结构尚可，有很多严重拼写及语法错误，如，主谓一致、词性等等。标点、大小写错误，有些句子难以理解。大概5～6左右。

gracehan16

Some students approval of the lectures education as the reason is the teacher can teach us what is correct and what is wrong .When the teacher is giving lecture,the students can learn something that they should learn.Students achiveved high scores only through remember what the eacher said in the lecture.

The others prefer discussions to lectures.This measure can stimulate student's interests and concentrate the students' attention on class.We can understand some questions clearly which we did not understand in the teacher's lecture.

Though there are many adventures from the lectures,I like the discussions education.There are many reasons why I like this way's education.Only through discussions can we gain knowledge forever.From the process of discussions,we really know how to solve the problems.We can not only learn much more than the correct answer,but also something more important in our life from discussions.

点评：结构基本清楚，句子有一定变化。但用词重复伴有部分语法错误，如时态。大概7～8左右。

当当熊

as for most universities,teachers teach students usually by lectures or by discussions.
some of students may agree that instuctors make speech in the class。what students have to do is to take the notes when the teacher is standing in front of them the whole are just listeners.

in contrast,others may prefer dicussing in ,the teacher give permission to students to communcate something about the professionnal knowledge with ne may show their respective opinion although something may be differerent from the text books.

as far as i am concerned,i tend to discuss in y,i think,the atmosphere of class shoud be more active which will motivate students to think over the problems .additionally,when confront the obstacle in class,it will make us easier to choose the best ways to solve the problem by discussing,but not ask the instructor for the answer last but not the least,discussing in class can force students to think about the question ,which will be helpful to develop the good habit of thingking.

all in word,i advocate instructors teach class by discussion.

点评：结构基本清楚，全无大小写之分，标点使用混乱，较多拼写和语法错误，如非谓语动词和搭配。大概6～7左右。

tdcllc

Nowadays there're two typical kinds of teaching patterns:lectures and discussions.

Some students feel like teaching by lectures.They consider only through such way can they gain knowledge well.It's important to catch hold ofthe key points in class,which is much relied on teachers' enforcing in lectures.Nevertheless,many a lot student prefer discussions.From their point of view,it's critical for students to actually understand what is taught in class.Just listening to teachers is far from enough,so students have to study through discussions to put knowledge into practise.

I think both ways have their own advantages,so it's advisable to combine them in teaching,which is more likely to show a better effect.

点评：结构基本清楚，个别短语有闪光。但很多句子和词组运用有错误，字数不足。大概6左右。