你写我改：BEC名师评点网友作文（7）

网友作文三：

To: All staff
From:Mrs Li

I would like to inform all of you that we would formulate a new policy of recycling the used paper in order for reducing the official stationery expences and meeting the environment needs. This policy will be implemented on 12.11.08 by putting the used paper in a certain (space)[1] . I hope all staff should could be co-operative with the scheme

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[1]如果地点不确定，还不如不说。

网友作文四：

TO:all staff
FROM:Kathy
DATE: 19,OCT
SUBJECT: new policy

I am writing to infome you the new policy about paper using[1] in our office, in order to reduce our expenses and to make our working enviroment better, [2] paper will be collected by ourselives and then reuse them, please put the eused paper in the designated box instead of throwing it directly into the scrap basket, I hope we can co-operate on this policy.

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[1]Being used
[2]这和改善你们的工作环境毫无关系，去掉。

网友作文五：

To: All staff
From:Management department

I am pleased to inform you that [1]all used paper in photocopy or printing could be recyled. As we know there are many papers [2]of which one side could be used again.
So please put the all-used paper in the red box beside the duplicator. and the one side-blank paper,pls put in the blue box.
I would like all of you obey the command[3]. Thank you.

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[1]公司新政策的发布不用这么开心，开头正规些就可以了。
[2]这是不可数名词，there is a lot of paper....
[3]cooperate