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背景介绍:

这个叫邓正加的瓜农,不过想把瓜种得甜一些,收获多一些,快快把西瓜卖完,好回家吃饭。这是他的中国梦。你连一个瓜农的梦都保护不了,怎么坐下来跟我们谈中国梦。
这段话摘自李承鹏新浪微博,近期,瓜农事件吵得沸沸扬扬,事情也一波几转。

话题:

我们不谈政治,不谈社会问题,我们只谈谈自己的切身感受。
中国梦,其实是我们每个人的梦,当我们每个人的梦都达成了的时候,中国梦自然就实现了。
当然,这只是我的一方之言,你怎么看?

范例1:

We can see or hear the phrase "Chinese Dream" from all corner in our lives such as from the news report, from the news paper we read or even from the daily talk which contains many good wishes we have to our dear motherland. However at the other hand, it reveals the deficiencies in our policy economic cultural systems.

In my point of view, the achievement of Chinese Dream is the consequences of achievement of the dreams of individuals. Like Marx said "Everyone is the creator of the history". We are the god of ourselves who can create a greater world for ourselves.

范例2:

It shocked me when I heard of the event that the farmer was attacked by the city manager, which seems common in China. Everyone has his right to chase the dream but on its muddy way, he should experience monstrous trouble to realize it. When the person is pursuing his dream he cannot ignore the extrinsic and intrinsic factor. In China, people may mostly contribute to the extrinsic factor. They show hatred of government on the Internet. They make no effort to hide their emotion to attack whatever government does. It seems that Chinese are not proud of their motherland and they leave their country in haste. They do not consider that although the extrinsic reason is important, it cannot change and we can alter ourselves. However, in China, it can be seen commonly that people are always complaining atmosphere rather than down-to-earth. Citizens are eager to be upstarts in one night instead of working years to years. They are blind to their responsibility. If they complain the environment they are in, why not thinking who lead to the situation?

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