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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of application for a MBA program in Columbia University. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

1.介绍你目前所学专业;
2.介绍个人特长爱好以及性格;
3.说明为什么申请该校的MBA。

审题概述

这是一封留学申请信。要提供申请人的个人资历,写明申请学校和所学专业以及申请的理由。

【范文】

Dear Sir,

①I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in the MBA program in your university.

My name is Li Ming, and I am an undergraduate student of Marketing in Nanjing University. During the last four years, I have been studying hard and also working hard for the Students’Union. I am careful to ②keep a balance between study and ③extracurricular activities. I have won from the University various scholarships for my good study and my efficient Student’s Union work.

I’m interested in business and wish I could ①further my study overseas. I choose Columbia University because you have a long history and enjoy a good reputation in this field. I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of your school, and my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

第一段思路点评

直接表明要申请的专业

语言点提示

1.I am writing in the hope that:申请信常用句式

第二段思路点评

个人情况简介

语言点提示

raduate:意为“大学生”

a balance between:意为“保持平衡”

urricular activities:意为“课外活动”

第三段思路点评

说明申请该校的原因

语言点提示

r:意为“促进,进一步”

ent with:意为“适合的,适当的”

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