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话题:

Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Amiss
Amiss means something is off the mark, or seems to be incorrect. What is asmiss? Why is it amiss? How does that affect the situation?
This week's topic: They choice of clothing was amiss... (90-110 words)

Suggestions:
1) the evidence was amiss
2) caught onto the amiss actions
3) felt something was amiss
4) hints that something was amiss
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.

范例1:

It appeared that the manager seemed to use his cell phone much more often. Perhaps the telephone was only placed on the desk as a decorative piece since since something would seem to be amiss if there was not a telephone on the desktop. As he suspected that all the drawers were locked, it would be difficult to install bugs there. While his eyes were still wandering, the designer heard the office door open. He turned towards the door and saw the club manager walk in. The manager nodded towards the interior designer.

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