背景介绍:
众所周知,关爱留守儿童已经成为了社会关注的焦点。目前,留守儿童的数量多,且监护人多为孩子的爷爷奶奶等受教育程度较低的一群人。一些孩子们得到的物质较为丰富,而精神和心灵层面的关爱比较贫乏,而另外一些孩子连最起码的温饱都是一个问题。我们要用爱走进孩子们的心里,把更多的爱和呵护留给这些最可怜的孩子,让他们都能够健康快乐的成长。

要点提示:
1、说明留守儿童是一个很严重的社会问题和家庭问题。
2、提出建议和方法,怎么解决留守儿童的身心健康问题。
3、最后总结,并提出自己的观点。

例文参考:
Leftover Children Should Be Loved

Most of us own a simple and good life. City born and city bred, we sometimes imagine the idyllic pastoral scene such as the friendly people, the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature and the gentle pace of living. In face, everything has its pros and cons. The other side of picture is that leftover children have become a heavy topic nowadays, because most parents of these children consider that to feed their children well and to let them grow up health and safe in body are the most important task.However, as a matter of fact, in addition to provide the basic needs for their children, parents should pay more attention to their children’s psychological needs and their education.

For one thing, parents who cannot accompany their children often need to pay more attention to their children’s psychological needs.Therefore, it seems to me that government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays and organize" hand-in-hand" activity to call on more people to help them. We can also raise money to donate to these children. As the song says:"If everyone gives their love, the world will be better." It's very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.

For another, education of leftover children is also quite important. As the saying goes, “knowledge can change our fate”, education is an effective way to change the future of those children. In order to make those leftover children grow up in health, therefore, we need to show more concern about their psychological needs and their education.

In my view, leftover children should be encouraged to live with or near their parents, which is very helpful for them to be loved and concerned, they also can have a simple and good life.

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