谁能帮我改作文啊 谢谢
在沪江关注考研的沪友zyd33779410遇到了一个关于的疑惑，已有2人提出了自己的看法。
知识点疑惑描述
知识点相关讲解
It is vividly depicted (in) the picture that (two birds are flying here and there with their nest and children.) (There is no place to land; this is because all of the trees have been cut down) and turned to (be stumps.) (This picture symbolically reveals that deforestation (has) become a very serious problem. (This should blame on us human beings.) On the one hand, (people need wood as raw material for industry.) On the other, (more and )more (people occupy) vast forest (for their own purpose.) (Due to the above) factors, we can reasonably conclude it is time to take (measures and stop indiscriminately cutting trees. Futher more, we should establish more reserves of natural lands. (Last but not least), our society should put special emphasion (on)(/pay more attetion to) teaching (how to) proctect (the) enviroment 好久没写作文了，括号部分是修改的内容，不知道能不能帮上忙。。
—— mindyhuang86
第一行的two bird ----two birds 第二行的all of the tree ----all the trees， 第三行的have been felled and have turn ----have been felt and turn 第三行的unnumberal----错误词 第五行的day----daily 第六行的ro----or 第七行的woodmen----woodcutters 最后一行emphasison----stress
—— Lydinjia
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