The Not-So-Notable Accomplishment
没那么惹人注目的“成就”

1) "Maintained a 2.0 GPA."  大学期间平均成绩保持在2.0

2) "I get along with coworkers."  我和同事相处甚好

3) "Overcame procrastination." 克服了拖拉的习惯

Make sure any accomplishments you place on your resume will impress a potential employer. Your ability to do average work or fulfill the most basic requirements of a job does not warrant special mention.
确保你在简历上陈述的每个成就都可以让将来可能成为你雇主的人印象深刻。你能做好一般工作的能力或刚好达到一份工作的基本要求的能力并不值得特别提出来。

The Offbeat Accomplishment
不恰当的“成就”

1) "Set record for eating 45 eggs in two minutes."  曾创下两分钟吃45个鸡蛋的记录。

2) "Raised over $6,000 for an organization by sitting on a commode."  我曾经坐在马桶上为一个公司赚了六千美金。

3) "To be honest, the only thing I have ever won was a Cabbage Patch Kid. This doll was the result of a school raffle, and I was hated by many children for it."
老实说,我这一生中唯一赢得的奖品就是椰菜娃娃。这是一次学校抽奖的奖品,而且我因此还被很多同学嫉妒了。

Honors and awards received from professional associations, industry publications and educational institutions hold weight. But being overly playful and mentioning odd accolades as a vehicle to showcase your wacky sense of humor could cause employers to question your professionalism.
由专业协会、行业出版社或教育机构颁发的荣誉或奖励是有分量的。但是太过做作或为了展示你的幽默古怪而故意提及一些如交通工具等奇怪的奖励,都只会让雇主质疑你的专业性。

The Mistake-Ridden Accomplishment
错误的“成就”

1) "I have successed in all my endeavors."  我所有的努力都成功了。

2) "Dum major with my high school band."  与高中乐队一起取得了重大成功。

3) "I continually receive complaints on the high quality of work I perform." 我不断地因为高质量的工作而被投诉。

Finally, as with every other section of your resume, remember to carefully proofread the descriptions of your accomplishments. Don't undermine your achievements by misspelling them. Hiring managers are looking for applicants who demonstrate attention to detail. Research by Robert Half International indicates that just one resume error can sink a job seeker's chances of landing a job interview.
最后,和简历上的其他部分一样,一定要仔细检查你的成就描述。不要因为拼写错误而破坏了你的成就。招聘经理都想找到注意细节的候选人。Robert Half International的调查显示简历上简简单单的一个小错误都能够让候选人失去一次面试机会。

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