先看一个墨西哥叫Cancun的地方：

Cancun of Mexico has gained a lot of popularity on the tourist scene of late.

点评：你是不是会说is famous for? 注意popularity后面跟on

 

Cancun is full of energy and vitality for tourists and can be the ideal fun holiday spot for honeymooners and families as well. It is best known for its beaches and the best way to enjoy the holiday is to make the most of the beaches and the water sports.

点评：你是不是还是会说Cancun is famous for…口语两大必杀句型，there be以及这里的It is …形式主语

make the most of：尽可能多的去享受，开发

 

When in Cancun, enjoy the beautiful Caribbean coast and the food and the ambience. You haveworld class restaurants serving the most eclectic food in the world to you.

点评：ambience，气氛，氛围，跟atmosphere同义

world class，世界级的，别老是very good

eclectic，这个词意思比较纠结，但是可以认为就是“不同风格，多种多样”的意思

 

Indulge in water sports with some of the best instructors and it could be the never unforgettable experience that you are looking for.

点评：这里的indulge in表示“沉湎于”，给attract，appeal to这种提供了替换词，当然表示喜欢的程度更加深了。

 

Cancun water sports needs a special mentioning here because they have some of the world class snorkeling and scuba diving facilities. The great Mesoamerican reef is capable of giving competition to the great barrier reef of the Gold Coast.

点评：… needs a special mentioning …“尤其值得一提的是”这个表达法相信大家很不常用。

Snorkeling指的是浮浅，就是嘴里叼根氧气管在很浅的地方潜水，scuba diving就是水肺潜水了，就是带着氧气瓶，脚蹼这种东西扎到蛮深的地方。这两个是water sports的例子，大家说带水的地方时候都可以拿来套。

 

接下来Pattaya, Thailand，估计很多人去过：

Pattaya is a popular beach resort with a lot to offer the common tourist like swimming, water scooters, snorkeling, scuba diving, beach volleyball and para gliding. The Kon Lan Island or the Coral Island and the Million Years Stone Park, the Sriracha Tiger Zoo and the Pattaya Crocodile Farm are some of the places worth visiting here. The nightlife is a very popular attraction in Pattaya.

点评：这段比较简单，黑体字自己看下。关键看水上运动的例子，water scooter，水上摩托艇，beach volleyball，沙滩排球，para gliding，海上滑翔伞，就是带着降落伞在还海平面上面一点飘。

 

再来，Phuket，普吉岛：

Phuket is one of the most visited destinations in Thailand.

点评：你是不是还是会想到most popular place？

 

It is the largest island in Thailand with beautiful beaches with a chain of mountains and valleys. The beaches are dotted with coral reefs and palm trees.

点评：be dotted with，布满，有种星星点点的感觉。这种说出来直接9分。

 

There are dense forests surrounding the blue sea.

点评：描述很传神啊，dense forest,茂密的森林。

 

Golf, kayaking, boating, catamaran rides, angling and canoeing are some other activities you can indulge in here. Phuket is also popular for its nightlife.

点评：好多水上运动的例子！kayaking玩皮划艇，catamaran rides，貌似是坐大型游船，angling，钓鱼，原来fishing也有同义词，canoeing，独木船。