图表作文的变体
A. Write an essay that conveys the information in the following chart/graph/picture/drawing/cartoon accompanied by your comments.(1 信息〈具体的描述〉 2 对信息的看法)
B. Time limit
C. Word limit
写法：第一段依然是粗线条的描述
第二段进行深入细致的描述*图表语言*
第三段发表个人的评论
第1种 分析背后的原因
第2种 对图表的发展趋势，发表个人的看法
第3种 一般性的评论（原因、趋势）
1． 这种提醒考的是科研能力。 要会观察现象、看数据，会分析里面的规律性的东西
2． 考论证的能力。 观点是来自数据、图表本身；规律性的东西——观点；数举行的东西——论证支持。
3． 图表本身暗示作者的立场。
4． 一切的一切来源于图表。
考科研能力；考语言能力。
Directions:
Widespread tobacco consumption has led to grave consequences, yet the tobacco companies still claim that they make a valuable contribution to the world economy.
There is a discussion in a newspaper on the above two viewpoints.
Write an essay to the newspaper
1) criticizing their view and
2) justify your stand.
In your essay, make full use of the information provided in the pictures printed below.
You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
把图看懂，图的导向是什么，以此明确你的立场。
背诵11
The majority of people would agree that cigarette smoking has caused serious problems. But the tobacco companies insist that they contribute greatly to the world economy by paying taxes to the government and employing hundreds of workers.（当他的情景部分是两个观点，而图表本身又暗示了一个观点，在第一段要点击对方的观点，但是绝对不展开。也不要写的太长。）
Personally, I believe that cigarette production and consumption threatens to do more harm than good. Firstly, smoking is responsible for（是造成什么原因） many fatal diseases such as lung cancer, heart diseases and so on. According to the survey, tobacco consumers account for about 20% of the world population, and among them, three mill ion people die from smoking-related diseases every year. The fact that the output of tobacco production is reduced from 143.64 billion pounds in 1994 to 142 billion pounds in 1995 also suggests that people have come to realize the negative effects of smoking. Secondly, tobacco consumption is extremely wasteful of money. As is indicated in the pictures, 200 billion US dollars is lost due to smoking each year. Obviously, the total loss of money around the globe substantially exceeds(大大超过) the gain in the industry.（*全部来源于数据*仅是描述）
表层结构写出来，思考就生成观点。数据就变成论证。（不能这么写）
特殊要求：图表语言
In conclusion, as the economic development aims at making our life better, we cannot sacrifice our health for short-term financial benefits. If we have to spend more and more money providing medical services for those who suffer from smoking-related illnesses, the notion of promoting economy via tobacco production is not justifiable. It is high time that we fought for the total tobacco ban. 背诵11


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