新托福独立写作：2012年12月01日北美真题及范文 真题再现

Introduction思路拓展破题思路：先描述自己不支持的那一方观点做铺垫 转折引出全文论点：乡村生活更简单、淳朴、安全

破题

In regard to this question about life in the countryside or city,some people believe that city dwellers feel more satisfied withtheir comfortable and convenient lives.

中心论点

However, I believe that residents of the countryside often seemhappier and more at peace thanfrantic（紧张慌乱的）and nervouscity dwellers. People in the country tend to live a more satisfyinglife, because countryside residents often have a simpler, purer,and safer life.

Essay Body

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思路拓展 本段论点：乡村生活让人远离城市的喧嚣→烦恼→ 举例

例子展开：联想到pollution→从现象拓展到影响

本段论点

First, living far removed from the turmoil(混乱) andfrustrationsof a major city certainly is benefit of life in the country.

举例

Crime is usually a rare occurrence in the countryside, and the loudnoises, overcrowded roads and traffic jams which are common inmajor urban centers cannot be found in rural areas.

例子展开

The pollution in urban areas is severe due to vehicles, factories,and other elements, whereas the air in the countryside is muchcleaner than that in the city due to the absence of these pollutants.

结论

The availability of green space as well as fresh air is beneficial toone’s health because people living in the midst of(在…中间) nature feel a greater sense of ease and relaxation and are lesslikely to catch many diseases.

下结论的时候，需解释原因，逻辑方才完整。

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思路拓展 本段论点：乡村居民之间相处更融洽→ 解释本段论点→举例→一句话概括好处→结论

本段论点

People living in the country also experience a greater sense ofcommunity and enjoy more comfortable social networks.

解释论点

While urban people sometimes do not know the name of theperson next door, rural people share many aspects of their lives.

解释论点

采用对比写作手法展开，更为生动。

举例一

They may share some of the vegetables or fruits they plant or gettogether and chat with each other after a day of work.

举例二

They also participate in local events such as sporting events andweddings or funerals of the neighbors.

一句话概括好处

Most importantly, people there have deeper feelings for oneanother and help each other in emergencies.

结论

In a smaller countryside town, residents tend to know one anotherwell and provide help for each other. This provides everyone witha good sense of community

Conclusion

思路拓展结论：乡村居民的生活更安详、舒适

结论

While most city dwellers would never give up the stressfulexcitement of their own life, I believe people in rural areas aremore satisfied with their relaxed and simple lifestyle because offriendly neighbors and the quiet and safe environment.