3.北京卷

书面表达(共两节，35分)第一节情景作文(20分)
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
注意：
1．周记的开头已为你写好。
2．词数不少于60。

Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Bedside.

基本分析：
1. 文体：周记。 2. 人称：I 3. 时态：一般过去时
4. 事件大意：我为爷爷奶奶准备出行＋我送行 5. 图片要素：
图一：查询信息（train ticket, weather, hotel） 图二：买票（buy ticket）
图三：准备行装（package） 图四：送行（see-off）
3. 图片关联：
图一、二、三都是并列关系，主题是旅游前的准备阶段，三幅图没有轻重之分，所占篇幅比例相当。图四是最后的送别阶段，文章末尾要有点睛之笔，可以是送别感受，对爷爷奶奶的祝福，也可以是自己的成长和收获。
4. 文章立意：
今年的作文和90后的学生特点相联系，积极引导高中学生要培养独立性，增加实践能力，并要照顾体谅长辈。所以文章末尾的立意也可以往这方面考虑。

【参考范文】
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Bedside. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Bedside, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.

第二节开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

基本分析：
1. 三分之一描写要点：阳光，楼(很靠近)，弯曲的树。（the sun, two apartments/ flats
closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree）
2. 三分之二议论着眼立意：
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1.人生角度：在成长的道路上（树的成长），有曲折，有困难，（建筑的阻挡，弯曲）但是只要向着光明和希望（太阳）去努力拼搏，坚持不懈，还是能够冲破桎梏取得成功（树在楼的夹缝中长高了，超出建筑）。
2.和谐角度： 城市的发展（建筑）和环境的可持续发展（树的成长）要协调，要平衡，才能欣然共存（在阳光下）
3. 立意与现实生活关系：1. 引导90后要具有积极的生活态度，生活非一帆风顺的。2. 扣住低碳生活的环保热点，城市和环境的和谐发展也是低碳生活的必需。

【参考范文】
In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable condition. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does。