你是不是也不太了解托福独立写作的思路应该如何拓宽,总觉得翻来覆去无非就是那几个角度,很难突破创新。或者是写到一半思路卡顿,甚至觉得自己给出的观点不够恰当,没有说服力。到底该怎么拿到高分,下面的内容你可以看看。

有很多考托福的同学在面对独立写作的时候都觉得写作拿到高分甚至满分是一件很困难的事情。用好下面说到的7个万金油理由,以后面对陌生的话题,或者是思路枯竭的时候再也不用急了!

但是无论题干如何变化,你都可以尝试使用这7个万能理由:

effectiveness and efficiency/有效性

economy and finance/经济

technology and internet/科技和互联网

health and environment/健康与环境

culture and globalization/文化与全球化

social relationship/社交关系

career development/职业发展

用这些观点和题干结合,生成新的观点,接下来就拿一道题举例,告诉大家这7个万金油如何应用在具体的写作中:

题干

Government should invest more in education than infrastructure to improve the society?

这道题我们可以从万能思路中Effectiveness这个思路入手,那么大的观点就是:Education is more effective than infrastructure in changing the world.

这是一个high level的观点,比较宏观,接下来我们要做的就是narrow down, 将一个high level的观点narrow成一个middle level的观点:

it is more effective for the government to invest in education than infrastructure because such an act generates greater long-term welfare.

有middle level的观点之后,大家需要仔细的解释一下,补充一些细节:

In the long term, people will be able to learn more knowledge, enhance their professional skills, and change the world they live in, instead of simply enjoying easier rides to wherever they would like to go. This is exactly the reason why we should spend more in education.

最后,将他们放在一起,就可以组成一个段落啦:

Education is more effective than infrastructure in changing the world. it is more effective for the government to invest in education than infrastructure because such an act generates greater long-term welfare. In the long term, people will be able to learn more knowledge, enhance their professional skills, and change the world they live in, instead of simply enjoying easier rides to wherever they would like to go. This is exactly the reason why we should spend more in education.

这道题除了万金油观点的第一个:effectiveness之外,还可以用很多其他的观点。

比如第三个万能观点:technology and internet。大家可以说政府更多的投入到教育可以促进高科技快速发展,从而改变社会。

再比如第六个万能观点:social relationship。我们可以论述政府更多的投入教育可以让人与人之间的差距更平等,narrow social gap.

这个方法可以用到托福各种题目的写作当中,希望大家都能举一反三,多多去练习吧!如果您对英语学习感兴趣,想要深入学习,可以了解沪江网校精品课程,量身定制高效实用的个性化学习方案,专属督导全程伴学,扫一扫领200畅学卡。