四六级难度不是很大,但是得分率却非常的低,很多考生在备考四六级的时候,都会掌握一定的作文模板和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后,如果能够在作文中创造一些词汇或者是文章的闪光点,就一定让文章变的多彩。

  高分作文标志:

  1:是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

  下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:

  1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

  2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。

  如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。

  比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

  3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,

  people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

  下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。

  Computer and I ( By Simmy )

  I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

  exceedingly 替换 very

  thrilling 替换 exciting

  sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.

  google 替换 search

  an army of 替换 a lot of

  The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

  The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular。

  以上就是为大家整理的四六级作文模式:善用长短句和插入语,作文的写作要求是非常高的,很多人都觉得作文的难度不大,忽略了备考,在考试的时候又因为时间紧张,写出来的作品就不言而喻,希望本篇文章的介绍可以帮助到大家。