第三部分社会客观分析问答题

考官问道:what kind of qualities a good leader should have?

考生回答:

观点1:A good leader should be passionate,

理由1:Because his passion will help him do well.

例子1: 例子1:In business, a passionate boss can do his business better when he likes it.

观点2: 观点2:A good leader also should be like a model.

理由2: 理由2:Because followers will all learn from their leader.

例子2: 例子2:In Business, successful leadership is mainlyabout whether his employees work as hard as their boss does.

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观点1(旧):A good leader should be passionate.

观点1(新):successful leaders would probably be quite passionate and enthusiastic about what they do.

成功的领导人应该很可能是非常激情和热情地对待他们所作的事情。

理由1(旧):Because his passion will help him do well.

理由1(新):Success comes easily when someone is obsessed with his career. He will be more relentless in the pursuit of his goals if he’s keen on his business. He will achieve his peak performance only when he’s doing the thing which interests him or something he cares about.

成功来得容易当一个人沉溺于他的职业,他会更加不停歇地追求他的目标如果他很喜欢他的生意,他将会到达顶峰表现只有当他做自己感兴趣的事情和他在意的事情。

例子1(旧):In business, a passionate boss can do his business better when he likes it.

例子1(新):Entrepreneurs who succeed do not mind the fact that they are putting in 15 or 18 hours a day to their business because they absolutely love what they do.Success in business is all about patienceand hard work, which can only be attained if someone is passionate and crazy with his tasks and activities. So, most of the time, the more passionate a man is, the more successful he can be.

成功的企业家不介意一个事实,他们每天工作15到18个小时仅仅因为他们绝对的喜欢他们所做的,只有当你对疯狂的热爱你的任务和活动的时候,你才会耐心和努力工作,这使你商业上成功。所以,大多数情况下,你越是激情,你就会越成功。

观点 观点2(旧):A good leader also should be reliable.

观点2(新): True leaders should have trustworthiness built on good relationship with his followers.
真正的领导人应该由别人的信任,建立在他很好的人际关系。

理由2(旧):because no one will work for the person who can not be trusted.

理由2(新):the way they deal with people will lay the foundation for the strength of their groups. The stronger the relationship is, the stronger the subordinates’ trust and confidence is in their capabilities.

他们处理和人们的关系为他们队的优点建立了基础,这种关系越强,他的下属的对他的信任和信心就越加成为他们的综合能力。

例子2(旧):In Business, successful leadership is mainly about whether his employees believein their boss or not.

例子2(新):Studies have shown that one fundamental basis of business leadership is the trust and confidence that employees have on their manager. Only when they have faith in their leader will they go through hell and high water for him and for the organization.

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