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第四部分写作(共两节,满分35分)

短文改错(共10小题;每小题I分,满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on.

答案:

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little(改为less) aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy(改为toys). I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did(改为 went) wrong, I got angry and broke it(改为them). For a while (^my)parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which(改为what) was happening. When I tear(改为tore) apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to(改为for) you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must(改为could/might) make my toys to(去掉to) last My attitude changed from then on.