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第四部分写作(共两节.满分35分)

第一节短文改错(共1t;小魔:每小题1分.满分l0分)

(注意:在试题卷上作答无效)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边 板线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正: 
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个肠字符号(A)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。

Every one of us can make a great efforts to __76___

cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all __77___

of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only __78___

when we have a real need. That won't be easy ,I know. __79___

but we have to start anywhere. What's more, we can go to __80___

work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy ___81___

smaller cars that bum less oil. Other way is to watch our ____82____

everyday use of water and electric at home. For example,_____83___

how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the _____84____

lights or television when no one else was there? ___85____ 

【答案及解析】

76. a   去掉a make great efforts。

77. off错误。off 改为down, cut down 切断。

78. to   reducing to the use，去掉to。

79. √

80. anywhere错误。anywhere 改为 somewhere。

81. and错误。 and 改为 or。

82. Other错误。Other 改为 Another。

83. electric错误。electric 改为 electricity。

84. leave错误。 leave 改为 left。

85. on。 leave the lights or television on。