要点提示:
1、 写作开头,读懂题意。此文说的是手机在某些场合给他人带来了麻烦,具体阐述带来了哪些麻烦,并且我们应该怎么做。
2、 提笔写作,文章第一段,开门见山。以一句话总结概括全文主题。
3、 文章第二段,依次阐述自己的观点。说明手机在一些场合下给他人带来的不便。
4、 文章第三段,总结。对第二段描述的现象,做出相应的措施。
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Put your phone away


      As techno1ogy develops fast, mobile phone is becoming a necessity for most people. Obviously, it is convenient for people to contact others, and thanks to it, we can be hardly absent from any important meetings,great deals or admirable opportunities。
      However, sometimes the mobile phone also brings embarrassment to us. We can notice that someone press his mobile phone to his ear and shout loudly in public, even there are many people around him. What’s more, on some formal occasions the mobi1e phone rings continuous1y, and it interrupts people around, as a consequence, people can’t concentrate on what they are doing because of the continuous ringing. And we often focus on our phones while someone others are talking to us. It is impolite.
      Altogether, to respect others and ourselves, we should think about others’ feeling and quiet our phones in public. Besides, we should talk on the phone in a private place so as to not disturb others.