高额悬赏:请帮忙修改简历中的英文

在沪江关注实用英语的沪友mywaysissi遇到了一个关于职场英语的疑惑,并悬赏200沪元,已有1人提出了自己的看法

知识点疑惑描述:

1. • Proofread and coordinated 100+ teaching materials, as well as rewrote some of them; • Assisted in designing a brochure for Chinese language performance training by proposing 10* suitable practices and planning the layout; • Organized 5+ events (e.g., students’ annual show, trial classes), collaborating with 6 teachers. 2. • Responsible for 3 classes (primary~secondary), each having 15 students and 6 periods/week; • Compiled 6 test papers independently. 3. • Responsible for 4 classes (primary~secondary), each having around 30 local students and 3 periods/week; • “The Most Popular Subject” evaluated by students; • In charge of organizing the closing ceremony, including overall planning, program arrangement, task assignment, etc., during which grasped the skill of communicating with staff from different culture backgrounds. 4. • Managed the daily routine, e.g., arranging training courses, propagandizing and recruiting members; • Offered team shows in 10+ university events to cooperate with college departments and other clubs; • Lead the club to win the honor of “Special Contribution Award of the Year”. 5. • Volunteered in 2009 Xiamen International Marathon and geracomium visits.

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1.as well as 变成and if necessary, rewrote .... 2. 3.periods 是要表示次数吗,如果是就请用times during which(定语从句中缺主语了)I grasped the skill of communicating with staff from different culture backgrounds. In charge of organizing the closing ceremony, including overall planning, program arrangement, task assignment, etc., during which grasped the skill of communicating with staff from different culture backgrounds. 整个一个段落没有主谓宾。 你应该顺便把中文也发到这上面,好多地方意思不是很明白表达的
—— phoebe雨林守望者