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在沪江关注大杂烩的沪友夜光兔遇到了一个关于的疑惑，已有2人提出了自己的看法。

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It will add 9 million jobs in the society,among which 5 million jobs are used to resolve the re-employment of laid-off workers. among改为of "be unfit for a higher post but unwilling to take a lower one " is seriously affected employment. affected改为affecting Part Ⅲ.A Firstly, integrity. Many graduates found that the employment with a certain certificate, diploma and resumes can be convenience to find a job.Some students in the college are working hard in order to obtain the relevant certificates. While some students are not assiduous,they defraud companies of the initial trust through opportunistic false or fraudulent claims,it damages the overall image of the college graduates. 这段话employment应改为employees或candidates convenience改为convenient 最后的it改为which，为非限制性定语从句 Part Ⅲ.B Secondly, the overall quality of students are on a downward trend.Owing to the expansion of colleges, the expansion of college enrollment, the lower scores of entering ,and the fact that many college students do not work hard or lack of practical experience 第一句are改为is，主语是the overall quality owning to后面的整句话不是一个完整的句子，缺少谓语，这里最好把owning to...放在句首，然后接着the quality of.....，把两句合为一句，作为一个因果关系。 Part Ⅴ In a nutshell, though people will never come to the same conclusion on the job hunting, as a problematic issue, my opinion is that it should depend on yourselves to find a job.When you are in front of your boss, you can say it confidentally, “Boss,that’s my job!” 这句话最后不应该用confidentially，应该用confidently。confidential意为“机密的”，这里应该用confident“自信的”

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