**何为成功？

1． To us，a winner is one who responds authentically by being credible, trustworthy, responsive, and genuine, both as an individual and as a member of a society.

要点：由who引导的定于从句修饰one。by用作介词，意思是"借助于"。四个平行的形容词credible，trustworthy，responsive和genuine一起作动名词being的标表语。固定用法both...and...意思是"既...又..."。因为定语太长，建议采用分句法和融合法进行翻译。

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**看看别人眼中的人生目标是怎样的，然后想想自己的goal of life......

2． Certainly the humanist thinkers of the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries, who are our ideological ancestors, thought that the goal of life was the full unfolding of a person's potentialities; what mattered to them was the person who is much, not the one who has much or uses much.

要点：本句结构复杂。有一个非限定性定语从句who are our ideological ancestors（修饰thinkers），一个that引导的宾语从句，一个what引导的主语从句和两个who引导的定语从句（分别修饰person和one）。因为非限定性定语从句较长，翻译时采用后置法。Who引导的定语从句比较简单，可翻译成带"的"的汉语偏正结构。

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