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06/06/24

Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools, but other people think that it can have a negative effect. Discuss the two points and give your own opinion.

Private secondary schools are booming as never before in China and I believe parents if able to afford the tuition fees had better send their children to private secondary schools though a small number of flaws are inevitable.(38words)

It is undeniable that attending private secondary schools is at such a high cost that an overwhelming majority of parents cannot afford or feel reluctant to pay. Take, for instance, China. There are a great many public secondary schools of which the cost is by far lower and in which the teachers are equally well-qualified. More parents, therefore, tend to choose public schools.(63words)

However, private secondary schools, most of which are adequately financed, can provide far better conditions available to the students. Some private schools, as far as I am concerned, superbly equip each of their classrooms with two air-conditioners and four electric fans so that the students can study in a fairly comfortable environment, especially when it comes to a scorching summer or frigid winter. Public schools, however, are usually poorly equipped due to dearth of funds.(75words)

In addition, the stricter regulatory system of private schools obliges the teachers to be more responsible and competitive. It is reported that the least popular teachers who are rated as unqualified might be fired relentlessly by private schools, which nonetheless seldom occurs in public schools. System of this sort, stringent as it is, does make the teachers more responsible to their students, urging their education quality towards a higher level. (70words)

Overall, I am strongly convinced that private secondary schools are a better option for wealthy families that can afford the fees except for some minor unavoidable demerits.(27words) (273words in total)