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话题:

Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Monitor
A monitor is a device used for viewing and observing. What does the monitor look like? Who is using the monitor? Why?
This week's topic: They gathered around the monitor... (90-110 words)

Suggestions:
1) attaching a new monitor to the computer
2) many monitors in a security surveillance room
3) monitor one's progress
4) monitor the index
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.

范例1:

The model shook his hand and greeted Hodge warmly. As they exchanged greetings, Hodge could not help but look beyond the model, noting the person disappearing around the corner down the long hallway, the person whose backside seemed to remind him of something. After they entered the studio, Hodge stayed in the back along with all the other staff members. He paid close attention to the test shoot. After a couple rounds of shots, they gathered around the monitor to check their work. The concept of the shoot was as discussed before, and Hodge liked the outcome.

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