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话题：

网络维权

范例1：

Since the 15th of March is the consumer protection day, the new protection law focuses on how to protect the rights of web citizen. Some consumers purchasing on the Internet find that e-commerce business is not satisfied at all. The products they like is just an untrue description and it is hyperbolic. Some consumers are unsatisfied with its poor after-sales services and buyers can excuse that once the products are sold, it cannot return. Hence, the new law is launched adhesive with some measure aiming to balance the relationship between buyers and seller.

范例2：

Internet network has transformed our daily life profoundly since its invention. It penetrated into every aspect of our existence, from food to transportation. Perhaps for people who get used to shop online, they meet couriers from different express delivery companies more often than visiting their parents. However even the infrastructure construction for both internet services and express delivery companies are building up in an exponential rate, the quality of the service did not represent relevant increase.
Many problems need improving, such as untrue description, unsatisfactory deliver service, and poor after-sales service. For e-commerce, express deliveries are of great importance for they are the only intermediary between customers and sellers. However, some couriers are not so responsible on their jobs. The most absurd news I have ever heard is one courier kept one client’s goods (several goldfishes) in his own pond, claiming that fish cannot be shipped. Obviously, government should give more regulation on internet service to protect both customers and sellers from losing their property.

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