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背景介绍:

接连发生的事故让人心神不禁为之一颤。他们本该享受着父母宠爱,快乐成长,无忧无路的孩子们居然面临着各种威胁。他们看到了本应该被大人们遮挡住的那片黑暗。这让我们痛心,更值得我们反思。
都说儿童意味着未来,这些灿烂的笑容里不应该藏着阴霾。
我们应该做什么,我们能做什么?

话题:

What can we do to protect our children?

范例1:

   In view of those news, I think there are a punch of deficiencies we need to fix up. First and the most important, parents need to teach their little children to protect themselves and to call out for help if there is anything uncomfortable happened to them, at the same time, parents can talk with the children about the daily things happening at school in order to know more about their school lives. Secondly, the Education bureaus have to make rigorous investigation to each teacher to make sure their quality for being a teacher. Thirdly, the government must put the bill of protecting children into their schedule to provide a pure environment for them to grow up.

范例2:

   It is hard to protect the purity of children coming up with the fickle filthy atmosphere, which means the society is inundated with negative news like homosexual, rape, bomber, gun, and so on. If children grow up in such situation, their hearts is just loaded with hatred rather than happiness. However, the way to protect their heart of gold is not as difficult as we imagine, which is just to change ourselves no matter from behavior or from words and that can set the pattern for children because the youth is apt at mimicking from outside. In one word parents are the first teacher to children and if parents cannot be cultivated with positive energy, let alone hope them to foster a responsible child.

范例3:

   It has been reported that a teacher who committed several sexual assaults on children was sentenced to death. What worries me more is that lots of similar incidents haven’t been reported yet in China. And most of the criminals do not receive the punishment they deserve, but only get a so-called ‘disciplinary punishment within the party’. In order to keep our children from sexual assaults, a perfect legal system should be set up. Any settlement in private should not be allowed, such as expulsion from the party or being relived from their positions or simply some money for compensation. To conclude, only when there is a fair trial can our children be legally protected.

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