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背景介绍:

It is a Chinese style that they go visiting somewhere and leave something to prove that they have been there. Recently a piece of news that a boy left something to the ruins of ancient Egypt brought this kind of Chinese style back into the eyes of the public. What surprised us is that there still have been so many immoral behaviors exiting during the trip after such a long-time education of how rude this kind of behavior is.

话题:

How do you think about this immoral behavior?

And how to deal with it?

范例1:

That is common occurrence for Chinese people when traveling. They wrote their name down on the wall of the Pyramid,the Great Wall and The Forbidden City which are the cultural resources left by our ancestors and the symbols of ancient civilization which deserve the careful protection from us. However, this kind of immoral behavior done by Chinese people still happens all over the world, the Chinese characteristics left behind seems to laugh at the nation who call themselves as ancient civilizations. Dipping down to find the reasons, we can find that the lack of the sense that the ruins are not only a visiting sight but also a precious resource for human beings is the core part. We must tell our children how priceless the ruins are, and how important our protection is.Maybe by this way, they would know their immoral behavior means destruction.

范例2:

The reasons that lead to the phoneme are diverse like egoism,fickleness, blindness and so on. However, it is interesting to find out that the developed countries experienced it either, from the history of those countries. It can be concluded that after experiencing the great culture revolution, everything has been changing and everyone is money-critical which means people are blind to everything except money. Although the materialism is developing rapidly, ideological progress cannot catch up GDP growth. If Chinese do not want to be belittled, what they need to memorize is to improve their populace’s cultivation. Only when the barbarism has been changed, the country can become prosperous and strong. What Chinese now is just like a riche who have not culture. Hence, the way to achieve “Chinese dream” is rough beyond imagination.

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