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姓名:刘洪波

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Topic:
Nowadays the trend of fashion changes very rapidly, and gradually people become the slaves of it. Some people think that a person should choose comfortable clothes he or she likes, regardless of fashion.
Do you agree or disagree?
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
What is your opinion?

1段
第1句:引入背景
The improvement of the living standard is believed to have caused higher demand for fashion, because people have much more money to afford it.
第2句:交代辩论话题
However, there is a fear that people will lose their own tastes, and never find what they really need.
第3句:表达写作观点
My view is that to dress up fashion should be respected and it is also correct to choose the clothes people like.

2段
第4句:第一句,中心句
Being fashionable is healthy and brings some benefits to us.
第5句:进一步具体阐述理由
This is because seeking for beauty and wanting to look good are part of human nature.
第6句:所以观点成立
When some people start to wear stylish clothes like a superstar, they feel more confident and have good self-esteem, which is of course helpful and essential in some social and business occasions.

3段
第7句:第二原因,中心句
Moreover, fashion reflects the popular culture.
第8句:举例,越具体越好
For example, South Korean modern clothes and TV drama have been popular in order Asian countries for some time, and lately PSY's "Ganguam Style" even spreads around the world and almost everyone imitates his horse-riding dance.
第9句:例证解释说明
Being in fashion makes people understand and involve in the popular culture and feel up-to-date in this fast-changing world.

4段
第10句:讨论反方观点
This is not to say that everyone should be fashion-conscious.
第11句:反方论据
Certainly, it is a personal choice to put on the comfortable clothes people are interested in.
第12句:驳斥反方或部分同意
And since fashion changes over time, it would be better for people to pay more attention to something more meaningful in life, like pursuing knowledge, loving family and cherishing friendship.

5段
第13句:重申观点

In sum, fashion should be respected,
第14句:不能忽视反方观点
and at the same time people should have their own tastes of clothing style rather than blindly following the so-called"fashion".
第15句:思想提升
Sometimes the plain clothes may mirror a person's inner peace.

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