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2012年2月4日雅思大作文范文

所属:沪江英语  作者:谢振礼  评论:2
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>>Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think that young people should be free to behave as individuals.

龙年第一次雅思A类大作文真题:到底年轻人(1)是应该遵守传统,(2)还是可以被允许有自由的行为?

谢振礼老师倾向选择(2)作为立场,让年轻人自由地检验传统,这样子吹起牛来也比较有进展,又留退路,而却在逻辑思维上更能够自圆其说。按真题指示,不要忘记分头讨论(1)保留优良传统的社会价值。有立场就能针对试题来申论主题,这是开头第一句。因为:知识与经验有限,范文中或许缺乏支持主题的内容。所以:运用抽象的比喻提出【理由,例子,细节】。借以证明作者的立场。

回答这个试题不容易,主要是因为跑题的风险很大。细看真题,必须记住把关键字或其同义字重复出现在字里行间:tradition, society, individuals, free, behave.

隐形模板:起3承6转6合3

起--允许年轻人自由取舍传统,视传统为历史的导师,而不是未来的狱警。
承--(舍其劣)年轻人自由抗拒不好的传统束缚,如此社会才能进化。
转--(取其优)全力保卫优良的传统价值,如此相传社会的文化遗产。
合--年轻人在行为上分辨理性的活传统与非理性的死传统。

Every generation, young and old, should be allowed freedom to deal with the breaking down of certain patterns and standards being handed down from the past. As individuals, young people are particularly keen to the need to end whatever tradition they think is unreasonable for the society. All rebellious minds think alike--tradition is a guide for the past but not a jailer for the future.

Too often young men and women are enthusiastic about the evolution of beliefs and practices of their society, and their behaviors tend to challenge a number of elements of tradition. For that matter, mental independence is required because without an amount of freedom, tradition would be only an explanation for acting in conformity without thinking independently. Accordingly, young people ought not to be forced to express their new feelings in a mummified form, otherwise the evolution in tradition could not happen. The point is that not just because something is traditional, so there is reason enough to do it. It is good, however, for young people to continue a worthwhile tradition, and it is also good not to be captive of an unreasonable tradition which is not worth having. Although social bondage persists, it makes a difference if young people are permitted to think and act in such a way as different from that of a conservative mind in which the word 'tradition' means a shortcut to thinking or an excuse for acting.

Probably a society can only successfully function with traditional values--diverse customs, thoughts, lifestyles, religion, music, dance, arts and languages, among other things of culture. Young people had better learn that modern traditions are built on the past just as the past was built on the times that went before it. Traditions bring continuity to one's existence in a society, even though this sort of continuity is precisely what has been increasingly lost through modernity. Thus, it behooves young individuals to preserve their traditions of value by safeguarding against the negative influence from various factors such as industrialization, globalization, and assimilation or marginalization of special cultural groups. It certainly makes patriotic sense that young people's love for traditions worth continuing always strengthens the well-being of the society and never weakens all that is meant to identify themselves with their country. Good tradition being a good guide, young people, however rebellious, should not be entirely negative about the past with all its enduring heritages and necessary evils.

In conclusion, since a modern society is not supposed to be a dead community, young people may behave freely in treating tradition as the living faith of the dead and not as the dead faith of the living. They should not believe in traditions simply because many beliefs and practices have been handed down for many generations, but should instead observe and analyze anything that agrees with reason and is conductive to the good and benefit of the society. It takes a lot of history to make a tradition, so the best of which must be accepted and lived up to, from generation to generation.  

以下为2012年2月4日雅思大作文范文,文章具体写作,并且分析了2月4日雅思考试大作文的写作逻辑和谢总技巧,如果有考生依旧对于如何完成一篇优秀作文没有主意,赶快看看咯~
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