本文选自雅思听力Section 3,难度一般

Summary:学生在大学学习过程中,经常要做一些实地考察研究。在此之前,学生们必须提前做方案,在和同学们讨论之后提交给老师。老师修改之后才能开始实际的考察。本节讲的是一个学生在与老师讨论他们小组的地理实地考察方案,老师对其提出一些修改建议。

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Sandra
okay
Geography Society

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Right, Sandra. You wanted to see me to get some feedback on your group's proposal. The one you're submitting for the Geography Society field trip competition. I've had a look through your proposal and I think it's a really good choice. In fact, I only have a few things to say about it, but even in an outline document like this you really have to be careful to avoid typos and problems with layout in the proposal, and even in the contents page. So read it through carefully before submitting it, okay? Will do. And I've made a few notes on the proposal about things which could have been better sequenced. Okay. As for the writing itself, I've annotated the proposal as and where I thought it could be improved. Generally speaking, I feel you've often used complex structures and long sentences for the sake of it and as consequence, although your paragraphing and inclusion of subheadings help. It's quite hard to follow your train of thought at times.