无论是备考雅思写作task2还是托福独立写作,它们都是英语写作的范畴,最重要的当然是主体段内容的安排,今天要带同学们了解的也是关于主体段的写作思路框架——让步法,让步法适合于托福独立写作的各种类型的题型和话题。

我们下面看一道例题,适用下这个方法:

2022年11月05日托福独立写作

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid.

这是一道同意or不同意类型的题目,需要讨论的是“老师的薪资和医生等职业的薪资高低的问题,”那么其实题目中就存在两种观点的对碰,应该VS不应该。

接下来我们从好写的角度选一个立场,相对来讲同意会比较好写,然后就可以整体使用让步法来论述主体段,先讲述老师拥有高薪资的重要性,以及在各方面产生的积极影响。

最后提出反方的观点想法并且强烈驳斥掉反方观点,对于想要拿高分同学,建议主体段3-4段,前2-3段写正方,第3或4段写反方驳斥,这样论述是比较充分的,主体段的写作思路框架安排好了。

下面我们具体看下内容组织:

分论点句1:To start with, a decent paycheck would be conducive to the teachers' passion towards teaching.

(这段详细展开主要可以讨论老师这份工作的辛苦,比如:tons of questions from the students and pieces of homework waiting to be graded,高薪资可以给予老师认真对待教育的动力,并且感受到这份工作的价值feel the appreciation and recognition to their jobs)

分论点句2:Additionally, raising teachers' salaries can help produce a more educated and competent workforce.

(这段详细展开主要可以讨论更高的薪资也会带来更高质量的师资offer elites an incentive to take a career in education into consideration,进一步的积极意义就是students will receive a better education and contribute to a greater country.)

驳斥段:Naturally, some may argue that teachers' importance could not equal to that of life-saving duties in the emergency room or evidence-citing moments in the courtroom, (前面让步讲述反方的想法)but upon taking a deeper look into the issue, we will find out that education is just equally, if not even more crucial, than any other field.(but后提出强烈驳斥)

(这段详细展开主要需要讨论这个a deeper look到底指的是什么,要详细论述清楚,才能达到较好的驳斥效果。

比如,虽然这些职业doctors, lawyers or business leaders确实解决了一些老师做不到的社会关键问题,但是这些职业的精英就是老师一步步培养出来的,而且老师是能够去影响一个人一生的,无论是道德品质还是性格发展,Good teachers not only impart knowledge, but also pass on positive values to the next generation. They help juvenile delinquent get back on the right track, inspire introverts who show promise in painting to pursue arts, and encourage all the students to be valuable to the society.

所以国家未来的整体积极发展是非常依赖良好师资的培养,自然需要给予教师这个职业更多的关注和高薪资的鼓励)

以上就是今天跟大家分享英语写作的内容,如果大家想高效科学备考,快速出分,可以来网校跟着专业的老师一起系统学习托福知识。当然不管是什么英语考试或者只是想提高英语水平,大家都可以来这里交流资讯,学习提升。

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