【写作】

A类小作文:

 

题目:The graph shows the development of a particular college campus from 1975 to 2002 and the proposed development of 2022.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

解题思路:

这道题是地图题中比较多见的一种,描写学校前后布局的变化。这道题的特别之处是涉及到了三个时间的学校布局,在描写的时候,需要注意时态问题。

 

参考范文:

The two maps show the changes of a college layout between 1975 and 2002, and the projected development in the next two decades.

 

Overall, it is clear that by 2002 the principal change to the campus had been the addition of new buildings and the layout will continue to be improved according to the plan for 2022.  

 

In 1975, a large area in the center of the campus was covered with trees. There was a long path slanting through the trees, connecting the sports center to the lecture room. To the north of the lecture room, a car park was located alongside the buildings for drama and music. A main library can be seen in the southwest of the schoolyard.  

 

By 2002, much of the vegetation had been cleared to make room for the buildings. At the campus center, a new science building was constructed. Around the science building, the library had increased in space for the IT room and the car park had expanded to cater to the increasing number of staff.

 

By 2022, it is expected that a new building for indoor activities will be constructed on the site of the original sports field. In addition, there will be a short path built to link the sports field and the IT room.          

 

重点表达:

principal: adj.   主要的

slant: v.   倾斜

alongside: prep.  在……旁边

 

 

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李敏老师

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A类大作文:

题目:Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families, and spend less time entertaining outside. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

题型:双边讨论

 

话题:社会类

 

解题思路:需要讨论的是年轻人应该如何分配空闲时间。在家里陪长辈亲戚?还是出去社交娱乐?写作时应该注意讨论重点是young people,因此论述时需要结合年轻人的特点进行分析。另外题目中只是说more timeless time,并没有将任意一方绝对化,建议表述自己观点时也适当平衡两方,全面论述。

 

参考范文:

Compared with several decades before, youngsters now have more choices to spend their free time. While some people believe it is normal that the young generation takes long time participating in various entertainments, others condemn that they spare too little time with their families.

 

For many elders, young people are ambitious and energetic, but also inexperienced and credulous. They have high expectations and are eager to prove their value, which is also a weakness in the eyes of the seasoned adults. Therefore, young people should spend more time learning from the older generation, staying down-to-earth and being fully aware of their strengths and disadvantages. Family members are also capable to find the best way to communicate with children and help them achieve their goals. Besides, trust and love from home are far more precious than the recognition from colleagues or friends. They can be a robust thrust for one’s career, as well as a cosy harbour when one needs comfort and care.

 

Nevertheless, some hold an opposite view that young people should leave more time to go outside and see a different world. The quickest way for this is to take part in various social activities. When the young with the same ages and hobbies gather together, they will feel more relaxed and inspired. Through the entertainments, the young can learn from all walks of life and develop good social skills which are indispensable in modern life. They believe the wider the network of contacts is, the more opportunities they will have down the road.

 

In my opinion, both family and social relations are worth the time, for they bring us different benefits, and what matters most is how we balance the two. I render it is better for one to make enough preparations at home before plunging into the intriguing while complicated social activities.

 

 

重点表达:

condemn: v.   谴责

credulous: adj.   容易受骗的

stay down-to-earth:   脚踏实地

seasoned: adj.   成熟老练的

a robust thrust:    强力助推

indispensable: adj.   不可缺少的

plunge into:    热情投入……

 

 

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王倩竹老师

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