【写作】

A类小作文：

 

 

题目：The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and projected distribution in 2020.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

 

 

解题思路：

本次考查的是多柱图的动态图，需要描述三个国家1980-2020期间三个领域就业的情况。需要注意，时间跨度由过去到未来，所以时态上涉及一般过去时，现在完成进行时，一般将来时等。

 

 

参考范文：

The bar charts describe the percentages of people working in three different sectors in 1980 and 2020 in three countries.

 

Overall, for each of these three countries, the proportion of employment in services has been increasing universally since the year of 1980 while the employment rate in agriculture has been undergoing an opposite trend.

 

In country B, the agriculture sector was the most important source of employment in 1980, with 66% of people hired into such sectors. People employed in the services and industries respectively accounted for 25% and 20%. Four decades later, it is expected that the ratio of people working in agriculture will decrease to 48% in 2020 whereas the other two sectors will see an increase with the figures to 42% (for services) and 38% (for industries) respectively.

 

The distributions of employment in the three sectors in country A and C were similar in 1980 and both countries will see the similar trend in 2020. In 1980, Service sectors had the largest number of employers (46% in country A and 67% in country C), followed by industries (30% in country A and 38% in country C) and agriculture (20% in country A and 8% in country C). In 2020, there will be a job cut for both industries and agriculture sectors, but an increase of job opportunities for service sectors.             

 

 

 

重点表达：

①universally:  adv. 普遍地

②undergo:  v. 经历

③account for:  n. 占据

④job cut: 裁员

 

 

 

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A类大作文：

 

题目： In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, so people can build in whatever style they like. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

 

题型：分析利弊

 

话题：城市政府类

 

解题思路：建筑自古就能够直观体现出城市甚至国家特点。但随着人口增多、建筑需求量变大，许多地区的住宅与办公楼都趋于模板化，这一现象也或多或少受到了负面评论。于是有些城市撤销了对新建筑在设计和建造方面的管控。但如果人们完全按照自己的意愿盖房子，最终结果就一定好吗？本文会通过利弊两方对比，得出结论。

 

 

参考范文：

Architecture, combining both the practical function to hold people and the taste of aesthetics of the city as a whole, is an interesting concept to many people. The governments in some regions withdraw the regulations on new buildings so as to encourage architectural diversity and innovation. However, in my opinion, the disadvantages may outweigh the benefits if everyone is free to build whatever types he likes.

 

Admittedly, it will be dull when all the buildings in a city appear to be in the same size and structure. A place will lose its uniqueness when all the architectures are made out of one mode. But similarly, a large variety of different buildings will add no distinctive features to the place, except making it look messy and dizzy with different styles piling up randomly. Worse still, some buildings may be designed by strange-taste artists whose works will unfortunately stand as permanent eyesores to the public. Therefore, a complete release of control on architecture is not a wise decision.

 

Moreover, the building materials and land resources will be less considered if there are no regulations. Experts on architectures have already worked out sets of rules for design and construction based on professional experiments and calculation, so many of the regulations have their own scientific reasons. If people build houses out of their own will, regardless of the compulsory requirements, the appearances of the house may be given more priority to safety and practicality, which could lead to disasters in the long run.

 

All in all, we should note that great cities are made by the buildings that are not necessarily all that iconic. Diversity and conformity are not mutually exclusive, so buildings should be constructed based on personal preferences as well as government regulations.

 

 

 

 

重点表达：

①practical function:   实用功能

②aesthetics: n.   美学

③dizzy: adj.    头晕目眩的

④permanent: adj.   永久的

⑤eyesores: n.    难看的事物

⑥priority: n.   优先考虑的事情

⑦iconic: adj    标志性的

 

 

 

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