2016年12月大学英语六级作文解析及范文

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编辑点评:六级作文一般而言有三大评分标准,“语言”“结构”“内容”。今年的六级作文,不出意外,在形式结构上考查了笔者在六级强化班重点讲解的“议论文”和“图画文”之一,即文字型话题。而内容上考查的是“创新”相关话题,属于个人精神品质。

六级作文一般而言有三大评分标准,“语言”“结构”“内容”。今年的六级作文,不出意外,在形式结构上考查了在六级强化班重点讲解的“议论文”和“图画文”之一,即文字型话题。而内容上考查的是“创新”相关话题,属于个人精神品质。

下面来具体解析:
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on innovation/creation/invention. Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation/creation/invention. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
第一段:提出问题,引出创新的话题
第二段:分析问题,具体解析创新的原因,即创新的重要性
第三段:解决问题,具体解析鼓励创新的措施

先讲解及格版作文思路:
第一段,可以仿写“社会热点题”的首段写法,用一个with引导时间状语,作为大背景,进一步转到创新的话题。即 with the rapid development of the society, more and more people begin to realize the importance of innovation. Such as, a lot of new things appear in our daily life.
第二段,按照课堂中所论证的总分结构,可以从两个或者三个层面论证为什么我们应该创新,也就是创新的重要性。比如,个人,集体,社会。为了体现逻辑性,可以用相关连接词连接。
具体如下:there are many reasons for the importance of innovation. Firstly, for a person, if he has the spirit of innovation, he can be not satisfied with his current situation, and keep going until he succeeds. Secondly, for a team, creation can increase its efficiency. Thirdly, this kind of spirit can help the society develop faster and faster, so that there are more and more new things which can enrich our daily life.
 
第三段:按照课堂中所论证的总分总结构,可以从两个层面论证我们应该如何创新,也就是鼓励创新的措施。比如,个人,政府。连接词依旧继续。
具体如下:thus, it is very important for us to encourage innovation. On the one hand, we students should learn to be innovative in our daily life. On the other hand, governments could set some laws and regulations to encourage innovation. Only in this way can we have a better life.
 
及格版作文
With the rapid development of the society, more and more people begin to realize the importance of innovation. Such as, a lot of new things appear in our daily life.
There are many reasons for the importance of innovation. Firstly, for a person, if he has the spirit of innovation, he can be not satisfied with his current situation, and keep going until he succeeds. Secondly, for a team, creation can increase its efficiency. Thirdly, this kind of spirit can help the society develop faster and faster, so that there are more and more new things which can enrich our daily life.
Thus, it is very important for us to encourage innovation. On the one hand, we students should learn to be innovative in our daily life. On the other hand, governments could set some laws and regulations to encourage innovation. Only in this way can we have a better life. (151words)
 
另附一篇高分作文赏析,结构和内容上类似,只是在语言表达上更为精彩:
Along with the highly advanced society, the importance of innovation has been attached more and more significance in our country. There abound numerous novel gadgets in our daily life.
There exist countless contributors for this phenomenon mentioned above, while the following might be the most critical ones. To begin with, seen from the individual’s perspective, once equipped with innovation, he could be compelled to be never satisfied with his status quo, which guarantees his personal success. Apart from that, innovation is the main driving force behind increased competitiveness. To be the unrivaled one in the whole world, a nation has to keep abreast with time, ensuring the dominance of creation.
To put all into a nutshell, it goes without saying that innovation does matter. On the one hand, relevant authorities are supposed to set up relevant rules and regulations so as to highlight innovation. On the other hand, we each individual should cultivate this kind of viewpoint since our childhood, by which means we could be bestowed with a bright and promising future! (175words)
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