这个系列来自沪江部落“四六级作文训练营:改词扩句”,本节目适合备考英语四级和英语六级的朋友,以及有志于提高英语写作水平的朋友,旨在帮助大家写英文作文时,用语更加地道和规范。

本期节目继续我们的改词扩句,主讲副词的应用以及搭配问题。

例句:

In order to live a good life, it is becoming more and more important for people to learn knowledge well. Because in this modern world, knowledge is everything.

改句:

In order to live a happy(wonderful) life, it is becoming increasingly important for people to acquire knowledge well, for the reason that knowledge is everything in this modern world.

【解析】

首先我们看到原句中出现了more and more,在四六级作文中,它可算是常客,对阅卷老师而言,不具任何吸引力,而且有落入俗套的危险哦,所以在我们把它用一个简单的副词来替代,副词修饰形容词,相信会令人感觉眼前一亮。

其次,我们还要注意一个搭配问题,原句中的learn knowledge是明显的中式英语,很多同学会误用,正确的搭配应该是acquire knowledge。

最后,我们有余力可以把句子通过从句进行相连,使句子看起来更有结构感。

下面大家一起来试试吧!

1.China is developing very fast in recent years.

答案:

China is highly developed in recent years.

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