第二章 插入结构
除了上一章的并列结构,英语长句中另一个常用结构就是插入结构。插入结构是在一个句子中某两个句子成分之间,如主谓,谓宾,定语和受定语等之间插入一个从句,短语或单词以对原来句子所表达的内容进行补充、添加、限定和说明。有时一个句子会有多个从句,分词短语等存在,再加上插入成分,就会使得句子结构显得很复杂,不易分清各部分得成分,而造成阅读上得障碍。插入成分最明显得标志是用逗号与主句隔开。但有时由于多种句子成分的存在,句子中会使用多个逗号,分号,从而导致插入得成分不易一眼看出,以至出现理解错误。本章我们就集中辨析这一类结构得句子。


Exercise

Dying patients especially—who are easiest to mislead and most often kept in the dark—can then not make decisions about the end of life: about whether or not they should enter a hospital, or to have surgery; about where and with whom they should spend their remaining time; about how they should bring their affairs to a close and take leave.

Computer crime, a phrase denoting illegal and surreptitious attempts to invade data banks in order to steal or modify records, or to release over computer networks software called a virus that corrupts data and programs, has grown at an alarming rate since the development of computer communications.

Hence, though the normal child masters some 80,000 words in sixteen years — about fourteen per day— little of this learning takes place in school.


要点分析和参考译文

要点:要点该句中破折号内得成分是插入语。介词about 之后三个分别由“whether or not”“where and with whom”“how”引起得从句做其宾语。动词短语to bring to a close意为“to cause to come to an end”; “to take leave”意为“say goodbye to sb.”
参考译文:特别是濒临死亡的病人——他们最容易受骗,也最会被蒙在鼓里——从而不能做出临终前的有关抉择:是否要住院,是否要进行手术,在何处与何人度过剩下的一点时光,以及如何处理完自己的事后再告别人世。

要点:本句的主句是“Computer crime grams, has grown at an alarming rate……”逗号之间的插入结构“a phrase……programs”是主句主语“Computer crime”的同位语。
参考译文:随着计算机通信的迅速发展,计算机犯罪以令人震惊的速度增长。计算机犯罪这个术语指的是用非法的,秘密的手段入侵数据库,以便偷取或修改数据库资料,或是在计算机网络中散布病毒软件,这些病毒能毁坏数据和程序。

要点:hence,就这样,副词表示结果。Though引导让步状语从句,从句的主语为the normal child, 谓语为master, about fourteen per day为插入语,起补充说明的作用,主句的主语为little of this learning; 主句的谓语是takes place
参考译文:这样,尽管正常的孩子在16年里能掌握大约8万个单词,大约一天学14个,但只有很少一部分是在学校里学来得。