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四级真题范文（1）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a news report to your school newspaper on a volunteer activity organized by your Student Union to help elderly people in the neighborhood. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【审题分析】

本次作文题目选取了应用文中的新闻报道，是考生不太熟悉的体裁。

从写作要求的内容来看，这是一篇记叙文，文章要求考生描述学生会组织的一项帮助社区老年人的志愿者活动，并进行事件升华分析。

【写作提纲】

开头段：总结描述。点明本次志愿活动发生的时间、地点和参与人物等。

主体段：具体描述。大学生在帮助社区老年人的过程中做了第一件事（到达指定家庭并了解老人的需求）、第二件事（和老人一起出门游玩或在家中陪伴老人）、第三件事（帮助老人做清扫工作）。这些行为给老人们带来了欢乐和温暖。

结尾段：事件分析。本次志愿活动给我们留下了深刻的印象，我们应该多多陪伴老人。

【写作范文】

Help the Elderly in a Volunteer Activity

Last Saturday, a volunteer activity was organized by our Student Union with the intention of helping the elderly people in the neighborhood. It was such an unforgettable memory that I still remember the whole process vividly. (开头段：总结描述）

55 volunteers involved were expected to go to the appointed families and help meet various needs of these aging persons. With our help, some old people were able to go to the places they wanted to visit, while other elderly individuals just enjoyed our company at home. We also cleaned the house, did some washing and fixed things for the elderly persons. I saw the sincere smile on their faces, and to me, it made everything worthwhile. （主体段：具体描述）

Whenever I look back on what happened that day, I think it is right to spend more time with the elderly. No one can deny that aging can be a difficult time for all the people. I will cherish all these memories forever.（结尾段：事件分析）

【范文翻译】

帮助老年人志愿活动

上周六，为帮助社区老年人，学生会组织了一次志愿者活动。这对我来说是一次难忘的记忆，整个过程仍然历历在目。

55名志愿者如约前往指定的家庭，帮助满足这些老年人的各种需求。在我们的帮助下，一些老人去了他们想去参观的地方，另一些老年人也在我们的陪伴中度过了欢快的时光。我们还打扫了房子，为老人做了一些清洗和修理工作。他们的脸上露出了由衷的微笑，对我而言，这就使我们所做的一切都有意义了。

每当我回想起那天所发生的一切，我都认为多花时间陪伴老年人是正确的。衰老对所有人来说都是一段艰难的时光，这是无法否认的，我会永远珍惜这段回忆。

【精彩句式】

① With our help, some old people were able to go to the places they wanted to visit, while other elderly individuals just enjoyed our company at home.

在我们的帮助下，一些老人去了他们想去参观的地方，另一些老年人也在我们的陪伴中度过了欢快的时光。

② I saw the sincere smile on their faces, and to me, it made everything worthwhile.

他们的脸上露出了由衷的微笑，对我而言，这就使我们所做的一切都有意义了。

③ No one can deny that aging can be a difficult time for all the people.

衰老对所有人来说都是一段艰难的时光，这是无法否认的。

【亮点词汇】

be organized by   由…组织

with the intention of   抱有…目的

unforgettable   adj. 难忘的

vividly   adv. 生动地

appointed    adj. 指定的

various   adj. 多方面的

individual   n. 个人

company   n. 陪伴

sincere   adj. 由衷的

worthwhile   adj. 值得的

cherish   v. 怀念

四级真题范文（2）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【审题分析】

这是一篇普通的论述型文章，是写作中最常考的体裁。

从写作要求的内容来看，这是一篇对比选择型的文章。毕业后的去向是大学生经常思考的问题，该话题对考生而言并不陌生。文章要求考生在“找工作还是自主创业”中做出选择，并阐释选择的原因。

审题的关键在于：find a job意为“找工作”；start a business of your own意为“自主创业”，明确主题词，并在两者中做出选择。

【写作提纲】

开头段：描述现象，表明观点。大学生毕业后会做出各种选择，我倾向于直接工作。

主体段：分析原因。原因1：大学生涉世未深，缺乏工作经验，直接创业风险大，可能导致失败。而找工作相对容易，能积累经验，资金。原因2：在工作中能够提升自我，培养许多能力。

结尾段：总结全文，重申观点。没有准备好就去创业是不合适的，我会先在工作中积累经验。

【写作范文】

Finding a Job First

As the graduation season approaches, all college students will be in a dilemma between finding a job or starting their own business. Students’ opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some students hold that they should give priority to finding a job, yet the others disagree with it. As for me, I would rather find a job first.（描述现象，表明观点）

The reasons for my decision are as follows. For one thing, starting a business always demands funds, experience and the market. It is much easier for the green hand just like me who has just graduated from the college to find a job first. For another, working for others could develop my personalities such as perseverance and stress tolerance, which can help me become more prepared and qualified if I would like to start my own business later.（分析原因）

In conclusion, chances always favor those who are fully prepared. And I don’t believe a person could really “build up from nothing”. As a result, I will find a job first after graduation.（总结全文，重申观点）

【范文翻译】

首先找到一份工作

随着毕业季的来临，很多大学生都将陷入是找工作抑或是自己创业这一进退两难的境地。不同的学生对此持不同意见，一些人认为他们应该优先选择找工作，而其他人则不认同。至于我，我宁愿先找一份工作。

我做出这一决定的原因如下。首先，创业需要资金、经验和市场。像我这样刚从大学毕业的新人，找一份工作更容易。另一方面，为他人工作可以塑造我的性格，比如说毅力和抗压能力，这能帮助我为之后的创业做好更充分的准备。

总而言之，机会总是留给有准备的人。我不认为一个人真的可以“白手起家”。因此，毕业后我会先找一份工作。

【精彩句式】

① As the graduation season approaches, all college students will be in a dilemma between finding a job or starting their own business.

随着毕业季的来临，很多大学生都将陷入是找工作抑或是自己创业这一进退两难的境地。

② For another, working for others could develop my personalities such as perseverance and stress tolerance, which can help me become more prepared and qualified if I would like to start my own business later.

另一方面，为他人工作可以塑造我的性格，比如说毅力和抗压能力，这能帮助我为之后的创业做好更充分的准备。

③In conclusion, chances always favor those who are fully prepared.

总而言之，机会总是留给有准备的人。

【亮点词汇】

graduation season 毕业季

approach v. 走进；临近

dilemma n. 困境；进退两难

give priority to 优先考虑；认为优先

demand v. 强烈要求；需要

perseverance n. 耐性；毅力

tolerance n. 宽容；容忍

prepared adj. 准备好的

qualified adj. 合格的；有资格的

build up from nothing 白手起家

四级真题范文（3）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family members upon making memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【审题分析】

该篇文章为应用文中的书信类（letter）写作，从写作要求的内容来看，这是写给父母或其他一位家庭成员的一封感谢信，主要感谢他在自己在取得成就过程中的帮助。

写作中可选择父亲节、母亲节等节日，就某一项成就对他们表达感恩之情。

写作要注意书信的格式：

1. 书信正文应有称谓（开头写收信人，落款写写信人），及结束语；

2. 称谓后的标点为逗号。

【写作提纲】

开头段：开门见山，表明写信目的：向父母或其他家庭成员在自己的某项成就中付出的帮助表示感谢（范文选取父亲支持自己到山区旅行的经历）。

主体段：具体阐述感谢的内容，在去山区旅行过程中，父亲的支持与帮助。首先，父亲支持自己追求兴趣爱好：支持自己选择有挑战性的事；第二，父亲对自己的教导：在艰苦环境中要坚强；第三，在自己生病时，父亲及时赶到：父亲深深的爱。

结尾段：这次经历的收获，再次向父亲表达感恩之情，感谢父亲让自己成长。

【写作范文】

Dear Dad,

Father’s Day is around the corner, ( 四级考试时间在父亲节前后，适时选择这样的开头，可以给阅卷老师一个好印象) and I’m writing this letter to express my thanks and love to you for supporting me in travelling 50 miles to a remote mountainous area with my friends, which is an absolutely memorable achievement for me. (开门见山，表达感谢)

Firstly, thank you for believing me that I can take good care of myself and supporting me for such a challenging thing, which made this experience possible.  (支持自己的决定) 

Secondly, I’d like to thank you for your encouragement when I went through the tough living conditions there. It was you who told me about learning from hardships, which not only made me ashamed of myself but also inspired me to hold on. (教导自己要坚强) 

Last but not least, thank you for visiting me immediately when you heard that I became seriously ill during the travel.(生病及时赶到) Not until that time did I realize how important I am in your heart.

I became much more mature after this experience. More importantly, I got to know what a great father I have.(体现父女之情) 

Thank you for teaching me to grow up. Love you!

Yours,

      Daisy

                                     

                                  

【范文翻译】

亲爱的爸爸：

随着父亲将至，我想借此信表达对您的感谢，感谢您对于我和朋友们去50 英里外的山区旅行的支持，这段经历让我终生难忘。

首先，感谢您相信我能够照顾好自己，支持我做有挑战的事情，这些信任和支持对于我的旅行经历不可或缺。

其次，感谢您在我生活条件困难的时候给予我鼓励。您告诉我不仅要从让我感到窘迫的困境中学习，也要从中获取激励，坚持下去。

最后，感谢您在我旅行期间生病时及时探望我。直到那时，我才意识到我在您心中多么重要。

通过这段经历，我变得更加成熟。更重要的是，我知道我有一个多么伟大的父亲。感谢您教会我成长。爱你！

您的女儿，

黛西

【精彩句式】

①Father’s Day is around the corner, and I’m writing this letter to express my thanks and love to you for supporting me in travelling 50 miles to a remote mountainous area with my friends, which is an absolutely memorable achievement for me.

随着父亲将至，我想借此信表达对您的感谢，感谢您对于我和朋友们去50 英里外的山区旅行的支持，这段经历让我终生难忘。

②Firstly, thank you for believing me that I can take good care of myself and supporting me for such a challenging thing, which made this experience possible.

首先，感谢您相信我能够照顾好自己，支持我做有挑战的事情，这些信任和支持对于我的旅行经历不可或缺。

③It was you who told me about learning from hardships, which not only made me ashamed of myself but also inspired me to hold on.

您告诉我不仅要从让我感到窘迫的困境中学习，也要从中获取激励，坚持下去。

④Not until that time did I realize how important I am in your heart.

直到那时，我才意识到我在您心中多么重要。

【亮点词汇】

around the corner 即将来临

remote adj. 遥远的；偏僻的

mountainous adj. 多山的

memorable adj. 难忘的

challenging adj. 挑战性的

encouragement n. 鼓励

be ashamed of 为…感到惭愧

hold on 坚持

immediately adv. 立即；立刻

mature adj. 成熟的