漂亮英语句子包含四个要素：

 

1 完整性：句子结构的完整；意义的完整


    2 连贯性：句子各部分之间的关系密切、协调、前后意思连贯、思想表达清楚有序


    3 简洁性：言简意赅


    4 多样性：句子形式多样化：会使文章语言生动，是为作文增色的有效手段——句式和结构单调、长度相近的句子会使文章单调、呆板、说服力不强。
   

具体包括以下几个方面：
   
    a. 长短句交错运用


    b.简单句、并列句和复合句交替运用


    c. 结构多样化：我们学过倒装结构；隔离结构；插入结构；否定结构；it结构；强调结构；比较结构；分词结构；无动词结构；独立结构；with复合结构，具体参见《突破教程》。这里强调一下分词结构，它可以为作文增色很多。很多从句和非谓语动词短语能够相互转化。


 名词从句可转化为非谓语动词短语

 

That John won the marathon surprised us.—〉John’s winning the Marathon surprised us.


I have not decided whether I should vote for Clint.—〉I have not decided whether to vote for Clint.

  
定语从句可转化为非谓语动词短语

The man (who is) standing at the gate is my English teacher.

The car (that was) repaired yesterday by him is my mother’s.

The next train that arrives is from New York.—> The next train to arrive is from New York.

   
状语从句可转化为非谓语动词短语

After he had watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.

—〉Having watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.

 

When they are heated metals expand.—〉(When) Heated, metals expand.

 

Because I do not know what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.

—〉Not knowing what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.

 

I spoke slowly and clearly in order that the audience could understand me.

—〉…in order for the audience to understand me.

 

If we are united, we stand; if we are divided, we fail. —〉United, we stand; divided, we fail.

 

Though he has lived in Canada for tree years, he still cannot speak English well.

—〉Having lived in Canada for three years, he still cannot speak English well.

 

d.主语多样化：中国人习惯总是以用人称主语，而英语中却常常使用无灵主语，如：

1 A terrible thought suddenly struck me—had I locked the door?

　　我突然产生了一个可怕的想法——我锁门了吗？

　　2 A strange peace came over her when she was alone.她独处时感到一种特别的安宁。


    3 I am very sorry that the pressure of other occupations has prevented me from sending an earlier reply

      to your letter.


    4 The smallest excuse would have served.


    5 That night sleep eluded me.         

6 The old house has seen better days.

　　
    7 Everything at the party spoke of careful planning.

　　
    8 It is generally felt that his appointment was a grave mistake.

　　
      现在许多人觉得，当时对他的任命是个严重的错误。　　


    9 When he had to speak, his confidence suddenly deserted him.


           当他不得不说话时，他突然失去了信心。

        e.       开头多样化：开头除了使用主语外，还可以用各种各样的结构

1 An expert in forest fire control, the forest ranger talked to the campers about safety in the woods.

同位语


2 Angry, Mr. Boyd began to defend his reputation with strong arguments.

形容词短语


3 Tired and dirty, the boys returned to the camp.

形容词短语


4 Jogging every day, I soon increased my energy level.

现在分词短语


5 Troubled by a dream, Tim woke up with a start.

过去分词


6 To succeed in that course, you must attend every class.

不定式短语


7 In the scientific laboratory, Madame Curie was an industrious worker.

介词短语


8 Because he was tired and discouraged, he did not want to rewrite the paper.

原因状语句


9 What you impulsively do in haste you may regret( )in leisure.

宾语从句提前

f.      运用修辞手法：圆周句；排比句；对偶句


1.        I came, I saw, I conquered.


2.        He was well-known, well-respected, and well-loved.


3.        The proof of gold is fire, the proof of woman, gold; the proof of man, a woman.

     火可以检验真金，金子可以检验女人，而女人可以检验男人。


4.        Government of the people, by the people and for the people shall not perish from the earth.

     这个民有、民主、民享的政府永远也不会从地球上消失


5.        With this faith we will be able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day.


6.   The power of French literature is in its prose writers; the power of English literature is in its poets.


7.   Along journey tests a horse’s strength; a long acquaintance shows a man’s heart.

 

    综上所述，如果同学们能够注意这些方面，必定能写出漂亮的作文！

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